Further to the feedback received from the presentation, I received additional feedback in a peer crit.
PEER 1 COMMENTS:
- Use kitsch imagery in collage > re-appropriate existing imagery, try garish/ holographic papers/ materials
- Images appealing but not yet communicative
- Strength - variation in media
- Good application of colour
- Work towards more immediate communications > think about adding text
PEER 2 COMMENTS:
- Flux between progressive and accessible imagery
- Think about clashing colours > what do they mean?
- Is edgy tasteful?
- Who would own something kitsch?
- Look into class divides > Grayson Perry
- Middle-class people drawn to modesty > mock poverty
These comments seem to echo feedback received in the last session. The main issues raised seem to revolve around immediacy in communication, more garish materials and greater exploration of class and culture. I feel these are elements I outlined in my action plan but have not yet acted on. My intentions are to now produce the next set of visual responses, fully engaging with these suggestions of media and matter. I have been able to collect some metallic and holographic papers so these should provide a good grounding for the next developments.
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